MG came over yesterday to give us feedback on the film. She basically picked the whole thing apart and left us bleeding on the floor (but in a nice way). We were devastated at first. But then… slowly…during a twilight walk along the Thames Southbank, we started to digest her critique…talk about it…formulate ideas of how to carry on. And, you know what, it’s gonna be alright…better than alright.
Getting criticism is difficult…especially when you think that you are almost at the end. But, all of this has been good for us…not just with regards to Tokyo Cowboys, but as writers/directors in general. It’s good to be able to take criticism and use it for all its worth…for the betterment of your art. And, we’ve been lucky so far. None of our critics have been mean. They’ve just told it like it is.
Patrick says that, in a sense, we are going back to some original concepts that sort of got lost during the long cutting process. So, we are stripping out all of the voice over, which was problematic anyway, and going back to basics. MG says “Trust the footage,” and that was genius. Let the guys tell their own stories. We are not getting rid of the voice over entirely, though. From very early on, we had these sort of post card style voice over bits…bits about Tokyo and her relationship with gaijin. Those will stay and serve as breaths in the film. But there will be only about six of them and probably recorded by a professional voice over artist. My first choice, of course, would be Alexandra Stewart…the most sublime voice of Sans Soleil. But, that might be just too much to ask for…
