“Mark at work at the Old Ingenium Office.”
A sequence is a “subset of the overall action.” Scenes can contain reversals… “scenes are strongest when they begin at one emotional or informational point and end at another…each scene has a beginning, middle and end.” What is my beginning, middle and end? The series of events? Mark working alone, Mark working with Todd, working with Nick, Japanese class, Mark and Nick at El Torito…how can we construct the scene? What information do I want to convey?
Enough for today. Karin has come with my ink, and it’s time for us to do our weekly shopping.
