tried, tried so hard to write some new voice over for Cloudy this evening. Patrick has re cut Cloudy’s bit, and it is really working. It’s more like a story now instead of some bizarre collage. We’ve removed all of the V.O. from his bit as well, and there was a lot of it. It just needs three bits. The first bit is already written, but I want to re do it…so tired, I’m not making any sense….
